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Writing Prompt- A Silent Storm

14 Nov

I haven’t written from a prompt in so long that it was nice to do this. It is fairly rough- as most all of these are that I share with you. I don’t edit much at all, and maybe one day I’ll look back and regret that but for now, I like that it’s something I’m able to do without too much work or editing or whatnot.

She sat on the edge of the wooden stool, fingers gripping the windowsill as she watched the darkening sky. Clouds had been rolling in and were slowly blocking out the blue she loved so much. She lowered her gaze to the ground, where squirrels and birds were dashing to their hidey-holes in trees. The farm dogs ran to the house, tails tucked between their legs, panting as they hurried inside. Even her father was coming in early, driving the tractor down the lane toward the shed they’d built for it last year. As if in response to the passing of the slow machine, the trees started waving in the wind, gently, gently.

Turning from the trees, she checked on her mother in the kitchen. She’d already helped lock the windows and doors, all but this front door where her father would hurry in with a worried gaze and a reassuring smile. Her mother was checking dinner, then would go stoke the stove. She smiled as her mother did just that. Her mother liked routine. Feeling vibrations in the wood floor, she turned to see her father cleaning his boots off on the front porch. She waited until he was ready and opened the door for him. And as she’d known he would, he looked worried but smiled at her so that the fear rising in her breast eased a little. She locked the door while he hung his coat up and moved to stand in front of the fire.

She turned back to the window, the dogs on either side of her, and watched the trees whipping back and forth in the wind and the rain… the rain was just as angry as the trees as it battered everything outside. A rhythmic tapping on the floor made her turn back around. Her father was sitting down in the rocking chair, smiling at her. Relieved that he hadn’t forgotten, she slipped off the stool, her bare feet hitting the wood floor one after the other, and hurried to climb into her father’s lap. He tucked a quilt over her and started the chair rocking as they watched the storm outside.

As she relaxed in the warmth of her father’s embrace, the stress that had been building in her chest eased even more. Storms were unnatural things – so violent and angry and yet, silent. Storms should rage and hurt one’s eardrums with the sound of the wind and rain and lightening. Instead, they remained silent- except for the occasional shuddering of the house from a particularly strong gust of wind. But the rocking chair kept up its rhythm, and her father’s arms were strong about her and she could feel that he was talking with her mother by the vibrations from his chest. And she pulled the quilt up around her shoulders as they rocked, gently, gently.

(the writing prompt was ‘describe a thunderstorm without using the sense of hearing’)

I hope you enjoyed this, thanks for stopping by SGL,

Laura

Writing Prompt – Freedom

21 Aug

Prompt: I’d rather die on my feet than live on my knees

I shifted in my bed, swinging my legs over the edge. It’d been so long since I’d stood up, I wondered if my legs would support me. Would I then be able to walk? Did I remember how? In that moment, I had to trust that my muscles would know. They always say that you only need to learn to ride a bicycle once, right? Perhaps that wasn’t the best analogy, since this was a little different. Walking being something that infants learn…

I pulled my attention back; this moment was too important to let my mind wander. But, blast it all if I didn’t have much control over my own thoughts anymore. I set my feet on the floor and stood, letting out a shaky breathe when my legs supported me.

“Is this really the path that you want to take? The other one isn’t all that bad.” He said, his voice meant to soothe.

But I heard the edge of anger, the sliver of disdain in it and widened my stance. I wouldn’t give in. I wouldn’t!

“And how do you see my life, once I’ve agreed to your plan? Do you see me as free?” The words came out of nowhere.  I clamped my mouth shut before more words spilled out.

“Of course. You’ll be free to live your own life, just as you have been these past fifteen years.”

To the outsider, his offer might have sounded good. Especially compared to the alternative I was gearing up for – possible death. But I knew what my life these past years had been like. And they’d been anything but free.

I knew what freedom was. I’d tasted it once- so many years ago it was a faint remembrance but it was there. And by that taste still lingering, I knew that how I’d been living – my body betraying me just as my mind was – that wasn’t freedom. I shifted my feet on the cold floor, sliding the right one forward a few inches. My stomach clenched and my muscles quivered but I remained standing. Emboldened, I slid my left foot forward.

Out of the corner of my eye, I saw him move but he checked himself. If I was to fail, it would be of my own doing. That had ever been his plan- set me up for doom, allow me to crash and burn and then, in the gentlest voice ever heard, pick me up and tell me how he’d known all along I couldn’t do it.

But this, this I would do. This was my one last chance for freedom. I didn’t care how much time I had left before my body gave out, I would die on my feet if I had to. No more crawling on my knees.

~A quick note- do I know what all these references are about? No. And while I’m curious, I find it a little cathartic to write cryptic things that tantalize the creative side of my brain, and then leave them there.

This way, we can each imagine just what it is that the person/victim has been going through and why they’re choosing now to break free of the control of the other person.

I hope you liked this and will enjoy future writing prompts that I hope to do as time goes on.

~Laura